hmm, great track man
YO, you've been working on this one for quite some time eh, it's good, great mastering, i actually wouldn't mind if i heard this on trance energy, i would be dancing my ass off or something, with a glass (or bottle) of old scotch in one hand.
Really, you've put a lot of effort in this one and it shows, i am honored you have me in your favourite audio.
Take care mate, and keep up the good work.
Heh :P thanks a lot mate :)
Yea you are in my audio list because you make realy cool melody's
(he realy does :O )
I almost made a song just by listening to your songs.
for some strange kind of magic, my own inspiration starts to think in the style of your melody or something xD. ah let me yelp xD.
Thanks for the review,
Greets
St0rmChaser
Stopping by to give you a pat on the back
Good work, i like it, especially the buildup in the beggining, yeah the kicks might be too strong for this type of music, i agree with the guy below on that one, more subtleness there would help, also i think if you later on added a background melody or maybe a higher one to complement the main one, that would really add depth to it.
But anyway, im no expert, and it's a good track you've made here, so keep up the good work.
Thanks for the review, and yeah I'll mess with the kick :) I did put in another melody on top of the piano but they were clashing so I'll have to go back and rework things. I'm good at pairing sounds together it's just figuring out what they should do is hard :S
Pretty nice
Dude, you're getting better and better, I see you're learning some new stuff each time, that's good, keep it up. The basses are good, melody is nice, the only thing that really bothered me, was that higher piched melody in the end, I think it should have an even higher pich, deeper sound, cuz it sounded kinnda like it's played on the low black keys, other than that it's awesome ;)
4/5
See ya dude
yeah dude thanks alot man
always like your reviews ;D
you are making realy nice songs too man keep it up!
cyaz =P
--DjCoast--
Damn man
I didn't plan on writing a review for this one, really. But it just kinnda stayed on loop in my room for like a hour or so. It's amazing man.
In short what the others below said, i love it.
DL'd, 5'd and Fave'd.
Not bad
I mean, it's good, but get the full FL studio, cuz i don't want you to use "i made it with FL demo so i can't save progress" as an excuse every time. The best part is 0.15 till 0.29 that's GREAT man, then those synts come in and it kinnda messes it up, the part from 0.49 on is kinnda forced in, wthout any real transition, and isn't really that great, than those crowd noises don't really work if you ask me.
Anyway get FL studio, work on the transitions, don't forcibly change the style too much and you'll improve a lot. The begining till 0.29, that's really good, REALLY good man, GREAT melody and base, but you kinnda forced the changes too much. It needs to be more consistent,
Anyway it's not bad, im sure you'll get better.
Keep workin, man. And you'll keep improvin.
Hey Pecka Prime.
Thx for your review. Yeah i still use demo, but it is not an excuse, it´s just to inform people that i use it, and that the song can´t be as good as all the others here on NG. Anyway, i liked the part you are talking about too, but i just thought that it needed to be harder, like a second lead. Yeah i know the change is way too big, but thats how it is :) Have you checked some of my other songs, cuz some of them are a lot better than this one. And yeah i will continue working on my skills, i am especially inspired by Nal1200 and his songs, they rock! :D
About getting FL studio. I don´t think i will buy FL cuz it´s too expensive and i don´t have that big of an interest in music making. But if people start to like these songs i upload here, perhaps i will reconsider it. The Crowd voices are to loud i know, and i´ve heard it before, but i like them, it gives a feeling of a live performance.
Thats all from me. Again Thanks for your review :)
--CyberPot--
Hey there
Good song, good game, good loop
The drum beat is nice, flute the perfect choice, also good melody with that one, but something's missing, in the background, i think a whoooosh-ing sound would be perfect, you know like a seabreeze, a gentle wind, i think that would really add some depth, also maybe a litle "softer" hihats, i think they sound too metallic (not metal as a genre, I mean as an element) - but maybe that's just me.
Anyway, you can probably just ignore me, that's just my opinion.
I hope you finish it, if you do, drop me a message please, cuz im pretty busy and I won't really spend much time on newgrounds.
It's good. I like it, cya.
Actually I probably won't ignore you. :P
Nice suggestions. I'll definitely take those into account whenever I try to finish this.
Now that I do have incentive to finish it. :3
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN
WTF man
Im not on newgrounds for a month or so, and
such talented young artists emerge, or something lol.
It's good man, good. I like it, nice work and stuff lol.
Cya dude.
its amazing sometimes at how much can happen in a month :P
check out my other work :D
kinda plain man, dry
You should do some equalizing work man.
Basically all you have goin for this song is that really deep bass
and the high synth, that's all, i mean that's the heart of the song.
I can hear some hats in the background and a snare, but it's
pushed towards the bass and the synth, so that's basically all you hear,
you hardly notice the other istruments.
So do some equalizing work, and
add something more to your beats, or make the bass hit more in the high frequencies. You're doing fine, you just have to give it some flavour man.
I'd vote 3/5, but as im writing this someone voted five, so im giving you a five, so that more people can hear your music, cuz I know it's kinnda hard to get attention.
Anyway the above is just my opinion man, my view.
Cya
I see what your sayin, this helps and i will definitly improve in thoes areas in my future songs.
Thanks for the review!
Amazing
I've checked out your stuff man, you shouldn't think down on yourself,
you're good, and are getting better, the melody is just PERFECT man,
really my kind of trance, it's awesome. 5/5.
Yeah, man
I like it, you put it together nicely man, it's quite catchy.
Im downloading this one, deserves a 4 all the way.
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