Pretty nice
Dude, you're getting better and better, I see you're learning some new stuff each time, that's good, keep it up. The basses are good, melody is nice, the only thing that really bothered me, was that higher piched melody in the end, I think it should have an even higher pich, deeper sound, cuz it sounded kinnda like it's played on the low black keys, other than that it's awesome ;)
4/5
See ya dude
yeah dude thanks alot man
always like your reviews ;D
you are making realy nice songs too man keep it up!
cyaz =P
--DjCoast--
Not bad
I mean, it's good, but get the full FL studio, cuz i don't want you to use "i made it with FL demo so i can't save progress" as an excuse every time. The best part is 0.15 till 0.29 that's GREAT man, then those synts come in and it kinnda messes it up, the part from 0.49 on is kinnda forced in, wthout any real transition, and isn't really that great, than those crowd noises don't really work if you ask me.
Anyway get FL studio, work on the transitions, don't forcibly change the style too much and you'll improve a lot. The begining till 0.29, that's really good, REALLY good man, GREAT melody and base, but you kinnda forced the changes too much. It needs to be more consistent,
Anyway it's not bad, im sure you'll get better.
Keep workin, man. And you'll keep improvin.
Hey Pecka Prime.
Thx for your review. Yeah i still use demo, but it is not an excuse, it´s just to inform people that i use it, and that the song can´t be as good as all the others here on NG. Anyway, i liked the part you are talking about too, but i just thought that it needed to be harder, like a second lead. Yeah i know the change is way too big, but thats how it is :) Have you checked some of my other songs, cuz some of them are a lot better than this one. And yeah i will continue working on my skills, i am especially inspired by Nal1200 and his songs, they rock! :D
About getting FL studio. I don´t think i will buy FL cuz it´s too expensive and i don´t have that big of an interest in music making. But if people start to like these songs i upload here, perhaps i will reconsider it. The Crowd voices are to loud i know, and i´ve heard it before, but i like them, it gives a feeling of a live performance.
Thats all from me. Again Thanks for your review :)
--CyberPot--
Hey there
Good song, good game, good loop
The drum beat is nice, flute the perfect choice, also good melody with that one, but something's missing, in the background, i think a whoooosh-ing sound would be perfect, you know like a seabreeze, a gentle wind, i think that would really add some depth, also maybe a litle "softer" hihats, i think they sound too metallic (not metal as a genre, I mean as an element) - but maybe that's just me.
Anyway, you can probably just ignore me, that's just my opinion.
I hope you finish it, if you do, drop me a message please, cuz im pretty busy and I won't really spend much time on newgrounds.
It's good. I like it, cya.
Actually I probably won't ignore you. :P
Nice suggestions. I'll definitely take those into account whenever I try to finish this.
Now that I do have incentive to finish it. :3
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN
WTF man
Im not on newgrounds for a month or so, and
such talented young artists emerge, or something lol.
It's good man, good. I like it, nice work and stuff lol.
Cya dude.
its amazing sometimes at how much can happen in a month :P
check out my other work :D
kinda plain man, dry
You should do some equalizing work man.
Basically all you have goin for this song is that really deep bass
and the high synth, that's all, i mean that's the heart of the song.
I can hear some hats in the background and a snare, but it's
pushed towards the bass and the synth, so that's basically all you hear,
you hardly notice the other istruments.
So do some equalizing work, and
add something more to your beats, or make the bass hit more in the high frequencies. You're doing fine, you just have to give it some flavour man.
I'd vote 3/5, but as im writing this someone voted five, so im giving you a five, so that more people can hear your music, cuz I know it's kinnda hard to get attention.
Anyway the above is just my opinion man, my view.
Cya
I see what your sayin, this helps and i will definitly improve in thoes areas in my future songs.
Thanks for the review!
very creative
You really went wild within those 56 seconds man :D.
Like the beat at 0.17, that transition at 0.46 is fun.
Make a full track man, something longer. I'd give it a 3,5
but since i can't, you get a 4 man. Keep up the good work.
Reminds me of tocadisco, for some reason.
thanks man!!
im already working on this one to be longer!
wen im finished il tel you ;D
thanks a lot!
Well, it's good
The bassline's fine, the beat is good.
But i really missed a good strong snare hit, to give it that rythm.
Maybe that's just my taste, dunno, cya.
Thnkx!!
Smooth
Like it man, it's good, 4/5. Damn it's catchy, im downloading it, gonna have this one in my playlist, im checking out your barney song now. Cya.
Thnkx alot!!!
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